I am offering a video going over my thoughts on your Kickstarter/Indiegogo campaign. I will post this video to my Boardgame/ crowdfunding Youtube channel, Bower's game Corner which has 7200+ Subscribers. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCaGg_BXr-jWyclqSMWfBo1g/
I have shot over 3000 videos covering the topic of Boardgames. Hundreds of those were for crowdfunded projects. I recently have ventured into more of the General Tech/ Kickstarter area. I have seen what works and can hopefully steer you in that direction. I have also talked to many publishers, manufacturers, and designers about pitfalls they have dealt with and can help you hopefully avoid Them. Also I’ll look for anything potentially confusing/misspelled ETC.
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